话题一 求助信

一、假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1.本人简介。2.求助内容。3.希望得到Tom的帮助。

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’ m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.

I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’ s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.

I’ m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

二、假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。

要点如下：1.作业多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。

Dear Kate,

I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’ m writing to ask you for help.

I’ m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’ t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’ s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.

Faced with the above problems, I’ m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

话题二 建议信

一、假定你是李华。你的笔友晓东是某学校一名高一学生。最近他来信说不知道如何学好高中英语，感到苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。建议内容如下：

1.尽量用英语交流，不要怕犯错误；2.坚持每天早晚朗读英语；3.多读英文报纸，看英文电影。

Dear Xiao Dong,

I’ m sorry you are having trouble in learning English in senior high school. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

Firstly, why not try to communicate with others in English? If you do so, you will feel confident gradually. Also, don’ t be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes. Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening. That way, you’ ll learn many important expressions. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you read more English newspapers and watch English movies.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

二、假定你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议。

要点如下：1.大胆自信；2.放慢语速；3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。

参考词汇：自信的confident肢体语言body language

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? I’ m glad to learn that you’ re going to China this winter. You say you’ re worried about your Chinese if you are in China. Now let me give you some advice. First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so you don’ t be afraid to make any mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. In this way, you can make yourself understood easily. Finally, you can use pictures or drawings and body language. As you know, most of body language is in common in the world. I hope these suggestions will help you.

Best wishes

Yours, Li Hua

话题三 感谢信

一、假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据下列写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。

1.对她表达感谢之意。2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生事情。3.希望了解她的近况。

Dear Sure,

I’ m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’ s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see it?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours, Li Hua

二、假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs.Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：1.对老师辛勤教学工作表示感谢；2.感谢在校期间老师对自己的教导；3.表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。

Dear Mrs. Wilson,

I’ m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, I’ d like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. It’ s you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said-- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instruction.

I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.

Are you still too busy? How I miss you, my beloved teacher! Wish you allthe best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

话题四 告知信

一、假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：

1.时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

Dear Leslie,

How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’ m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.

The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang Poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry.

You’ d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’ t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

二、假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’ s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’ d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’ s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

话题五 申请信

一、假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 1 0 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply!

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’ ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.

I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of great importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduce China to them, but I can know more about their countries as well.

I’ m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

话题六通知

一、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则英文通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：1.短片内容：学校的发展；2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’ s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments./Everyone is welcome to participate in it.

The Student Union

June 8, 201 9

二、假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。

时间：下周五6：00—8：00地点：教学楼101室内容：1.唱中国歌；2.比赛用筷子；3.学习包饺子。

Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?

I’ m the chairman of the Students’ Union. As the New Year is around the corner（即将到来） , we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.

What’ s more, you’ ll learn at the party how to make dumplings.

Sounds great, doesn’ t it? The party is scheduled（计划于）in Room101 of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday.

Please make sure you won’ t miss it. Thank you for your attention.

话题七 邀请信

一、假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

It's the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which I hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.

If you are able to come with us, please let me know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.

二、假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1.主题：环境保护；2.展览时间；3.投稿邮箱：[email protected].

Dear Peter,

How are you getting along? I'm writing to invite you to join in the International Students' Photography Show held by the photography club of our school.

As your best friend, I know you are skilled at taking photos. Now the International Students Photography Show is a chance for you to display your talent., The theme is environmental protection, aiming to call on more people to do what they can to protect the environment. The show will last from 8 June to 12 June,

If you want to join in the activity , please send your photos to intIphotoshow@ http://gmschool.com before May 31 . Don't hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

话题八 道歉信

一、假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bob,

I’ m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ ll have more time to read and select books. If it’ s convenient for you, let’ s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

话题九 新闻报道

5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者LiYue和ZhangHua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果.打扫.聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。

1.时间.地点.任务.活动；2.老人们的反应；3.简短评论。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Student Volunteers from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, they were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

Student Volunteers were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

话题十 咨询信

一、假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。参考词汇：住宿accommodation

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad， and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course. First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？ Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation isincluded.Would there be host families or university dormitories?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’ m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student of Oxford University, I’ d like to know if you have special price for students. As for the money you charge(索要), does it include the entrance fees for visiting the places? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’ d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for travelling? I really want to have a look at the places of interest in London.

话题十一 演讲稿

一、假如你是高三学生李华，请写一篇演讲稿，准备代表全体同学在毕业典礼上发言

内容要点如下：1.毕业的心情；2.高中三年的收获；3.感谢和决心。

Good morning, everyone.

I’ m Li Hua. It’ s my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech. It has been three years since I started my high school. At this moment, I cannot bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university. During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.

Before leaving, I’ d like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. It was they who patiently answered our endless questions. Besides, I owe many thanks to my dear classmates. Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’ t have overcome so many difficulties. Now I’ ve been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I

will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.

Thank you for your listening.

2021高考英语作文真题及满分范文汇总

全国I卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。

内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文

Dear Leslie,

How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

全国 II 卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

学生实例1（分数：24分 四川德阳中学）

Dear Henry

The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

点评

1.逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当；2.运用词块、句型丰富；3.个别用词需要改进，比如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯；4.第一段不够简洁。

全国 III 卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

I am Li Hua. Occasionallylearning that you are addicted to tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite youto join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interestsand improving our skills.

Considering the enormousbenefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventingus from getting shortsighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost intraining course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honor to begiven high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile,we would be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks.

If you are interested inwhat I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.

I’m looking forward to yourreply even your appearance in our training center soon.Yours,

Li Hua

北京卷 书面表达（满分25分）

第一节（15分）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。

请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to visit China（表示欢迎）

Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the Changjiang River deserve the effort【高分句型1】（建议的线路）．For one thing，you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which has been handed down from generation to generation【高分句型2】； For another，the river，extending as long as 6300 kilometres，runs through different parts of China．As a result，it can provides splendid landscape of different kinds（选择该线的理由）．

I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding，is bound to be a memorable experience for you【高分句型3】（祝愿）．

Yours，

Li Hua

Dear Jim,

I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Yours

Li Hua

第二节 （20 分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频 video

Graduation finally came．My classmates and I decided to do something．Having had a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school【高分句型1】（图片一：决定制作视频）．

Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life【高分句型2】（图片2：收集视频材料）．The editing part after that was tough．We debated over what to put into the video【高分句型3】．Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect．（图片3：视频取舍和制作） Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received（图片4：视频展示）．The students and teachers shared a great time，which surely gave us a great sense of achievement（结论）

江苏卷 书面表达（满分25分）请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容：1. 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2. 我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；3. 谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。

写作要求：1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。

一

The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.

The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.

China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.

二

As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.

However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.

三

As is indicated in the graph，the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015【高分句型1】，but its growth，for one reason or another，slowed down in 2016．

The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors．The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment．Besides，filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer．Moreover，the internet plays animportant part．On the internet，people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well，which is both time-saving and economical【高分句型2】（分析票房变化的原因）．

However，the film market may witness a slow down【高级词汇】 in the near future．Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones，and the ticket price is on the increase．

Therefore，the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers．

2022上海高三作文真题

一、图表作文

1．Directions: Write an English composition in 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

近期，我校学生会对高中生在家做家务的情况做了一个调查，调查结果如下。

请简要描述调查结果，并谈谈你对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。

【范文】

Recently, the Students’ Union of our school did a survey on the situation of high school students doing housework at home. The results are as follows.

55% of the students never do housework at home, while 10% of the students do. 12% of the students do chores occasionally, namely one or two times a week. And the percentage of the students who do housework three or four times a week is 23%[高分句型1].

In my opinion, it is good for students to do some housework. Reasons are as follows. Firstly, doing some housework can make you independent. You can’t depend on others all your life. Secondly, doing some housework can keep you healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Finally, doing some housework can share your parents’ work. They must be happy if you shoulder some housework voluntarily. So I think it is good for students to do some housework[高分句型2].

【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生简要描述对高中生在家做家务的情况的调查结果，并谈谈自己对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。

【详解】词汇积累 调查：survey→investigation

有用的：useful→helpful 偶尔：occasionally→from time to time

在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned

句式拓展 合并简单句

原句：In my opinion, it is good for students to do some housework. Reasons are as follows.

拓展句：In my opinion, the reasons why it is good for students to do house work are as follows.

2. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

下面的漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。请以此为素材写篇短文。你的作文必须包括：简要描述漫画内容； 就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。

【范文】

Opera is the treasure of the Chinese nation, but fewer and fewer people go to see it.

In the cartoon, grandpa and Grandson are watching a play in a theater. To the same play, two people's reaction is very different. The grandfather is listening to the music with great interest, while the grandson is bowing his head to sleepe[高分句型1] (运用由并列连词while连接的并列句，前后形成鲜明对比). The cartoon rflects that nowadays young people are not interested in traditional Chinese opera culture. I think young people should actively promote traditional Chinese culture, especially opera culture. In addition, under the background that contemporary young people do not“catch a cold" in opera culture, Chinese traditional opera culture should adapt to the trend of times, and make use of network technology and information means to reform and innovate opera culture, so that Chinese opera can enter the public's vision and be loved by the public[高分句型2] (so that引导的结果状语从句).

All in all, Chinese opera, especially Peking Opera, is the quintessence of Chinese culture. The contemporary youth have the responsibility and obligation to carry it forward, pass on the quintessence of Chinese culture, and make it popular at home and abroad.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文，所给漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。要求考生以此为素材写篇短文。文章必须包括:简要描述漫画内容;就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。

【详解】词汇积累 对.....感兴趣：be interested in→have interest in→show interest in

总之：all in all→in short →in brief 另外，此外：in addition→furthermore→moreover

反应，回应：reaction→response→reflection

2.句式拓展 合并简单句

原句: In the cartoon, grandpa and Grandson are watching a play in a theater. To the same play, two people's reaction is very different.

拓展句: In the cartoon, grandpa and Grandson are watching the same play, to which two people's reaction is very different.

二、开放性作文

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

1．目前，教育部办公厅印发了《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》。

通知明确：学生不得将手机带入校园，若确有将手机带入校园需求的，须经学生家长同意、书面提出申请。申请一旦获批，学生进校后应将手机交由学校统一保管，禁止带入课堂。

请你谈谈这一通知的颁布反映了怎样的社会现状，以及这一规定将起到怎样的作用。

【范文】

At present, the General Office of the Ministry of Education has issued a notice on strengthening the management of mobile phones for primary and secondary school students. The notice makes it clear that students are not allowed to bring their mobile phones into the campus. If they do need to bring their mobile phones into the campus【高分句型1】, they must apply in writing with the consent of their parents. Once the application is approved, students should leave their mobile phones in the custody of the school and are not allowed to take them into class.

The promulgation of this notice reflects that primary and secondary school students’s addiction to the mobile phones are so strong that it is high time that the government and the school should take effective measures to restrict or stop their use of mobile phones. The students spend too much time on the mobile phones playing games or chatting with their friends on social medium platforms, which has a bad effect on their study【高分句型2】. Parents appeal to the government to take action to stop this phenomenon.

I think this rule can have a very positive effect on students. Without mobile phones, they are more focused on their studies, which can improve their grades. In the case of less Internet access, the negative news in the society will greatly reduce their impact, which is beneficial to their forming a positive attitude towards life, as well as their personality and the development of the whole society.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生谈一谈《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》的颁布反映了怎样的社会现状，以及这一规定将起到怎样的作用。

【详解】词汇积累 允许：allow→permit 准许：consent→permission

反映：reflect→show 专注于：focus on→concentrate on

句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句：At present, the General Office of the Ministry of Education has issued a notice on strengthening the management of mobile phones for primary and secondary school students.

拓展句：At present, the General Office of the Ministry of Education has issued a notice that strengthens the management of mobile phones for primary and secondary school students.

2．广场舞 (Square Dance) 受到越来越多的人青睐。有人认为，广场舞充分利用公共资源，使人们强身健体。但也有人认为广场舞会给周围的居民带来噪音，影响人们的生活等。对此你有什么看法？请结合你的生活实际，谈谈你的想法和理由。

【范文】

Square dancing is favored by more and more people. Some people believe that Square Dance makes full use of public resources to make people fit and healthy. But there are also some people who think that dancing in the square will bring noise to the surrounding residents and affect people's life【高分句型1】.

I often wander on the square near my home and watch people dancing. I think Square Dance has more merits than shortages. Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, helping with weight loss or weight maintenance. Secondly, it helps to stretch the physique and reduce the backache. Thirdly, it provides opportunities to meet new friends and learn the spirit of cooperation in group activities.

In short, I think Square Dance is beneficial to our physical and mental health【高分句型2】.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生谈谈对于广场舞的想法和理由。

【详解】词汇积累 喜欢：favor→enjoy 影响：affect→influence

优点：merit→advantage 充分利用：make full use of=make the most of

句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, helping with weight loss or weight maintenance.

拓展句：Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, which helps with weight loss or weight maintenance.

3．中华中学为了建设书香校园，方案在教学楼道内设计一些“读书角”。为此，学校向广阔师生征求意见。假设你是该校学生王宏，给负责的张老师写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议与理由。你的邮件应包括：对“读书角〞的内容、布置、管理等的建议。说明这些建议的理由。注： 文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。

【范文】

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I hope I can provide some useful suggestions for the design of the reading corner. First of all, each class only needs to set up a few desks in the appropriate corner and it can be used as a place to put books, which can save money and ensure the simple layout【高分句型1】(运用了which引导的定语从句). Secondly, books can be donated by teachers and students or students bring their own books. Thirdly, the books of each class should be managed by themselves, reducing the management burden of the school, which can also ensure the independence and characteristics of the book corner of each class【高分句型2】(运用了现在分词作结果状语). Finally, the teacher in charge should review the books the students bring or buy to ensure the quality of the books and the safety of the content.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给张老师写-封电子邮件，对图书角提出你的建议与理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→advice 建立：build→set up

保证：ensure→make sure 特色：characteristic→feature

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, each class only needs to set up a few desks in the appropriate corner and it can be used as a place to put books

拓展句：First of all,, each class only needs to set up a few desks in the appropriate corner that can be used as a place to put books

4．你是高三学生刘晓，你所在社区正在考虑为区域内的高龄老人引进一项便民服务。

目前有三个备选方案：①一键急救呼叫(one-button first-aid call)；②社区老年食堂(neighbourhood canteen for seniors)；③老年娱乐中心。

请给居委会(neighbourhood committee)写一封信，谈谈你的看法。

信中必须包括：1. 你同意的方案; 2. 你同意的理由; 3. 你对于提高此项服务质量建议。

【范文】

Dear neighbourhood committee,

As we all know, the community is considering introducing a convenience service for the elderly in the region. At present, there are three ways to use it: one- button first- aid call, neighbourhood canteen for seniors and a senior recreation center.I am in favor of providing a one- button first-aid call for the elderly. For one thing, nowadays many old people live alone and most of their kids are working outside, so it is difficult for them to get timely care. For another, one- button first- aid call contains many functions, which can obtain the identity of the caller and the current location, so that the old man can be rescued in the first time【高分句型1】( which引导的非限制性定语从句).We should teach the old people to use one-button first-aid call and be able to use it accurately in emergencies. Of course, the most important thing is to communicate more with the old people and keep abreast of the old people's recent situation (不定式作表语).

Liu Xiao

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求考生写-封关于为所在社区的高龄高人引进一项便民服务的建议信。

【详解】重点词组 as we all know convenience at present

senior recreation center in favor of in the first time

in emergencies of course keep abreast of

连词成句

【范文】

Dear monitor,

It's almost the end of our high school years. I would like to call for a class meeting with the topic "For our dreams". AIll the students and out teachers will take part in it. For one thing, the college entrance examination is coming and we will be apart, which may have a bad effect on our mind.[高分句型1] (活动主题和主要活动安排， which弓导定语从句) We will hold a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us speak at the meeting actively. Besides, we also will show our sincere thanks to our teachers. They have been devoting themselves to helping us in study and life. Teachers hope that we can still study hard in the future and come back to high schaol often. [高分句型2]（）After the discussion, we will all decide to study hard as usual and hope that we all can do well in the college entrance examination. (主题和活动的意义)

Yours,

Li Hua

7.假定你是李华，你父母决定于五一小长假带你去旅游，他们让你制定一个旅行计划并以电子邮件的方式告知他们你的计划。

内容包括：1.目地及预算；2.交通方式及理由；3.出发时间地点等。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mom and Dad,

【范文】

Dear Mom and Dad,

Knowing that you decided to go for a tour with me during the May Day holiday, I'm more than happy, and I have made a plan for it[高分句型1] (现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句) .

We will pay a visit to Bejjing together, which will cost us about 1500 yuan[高分句型2] (which引导非限制性定语从句). First, we can choose a bus ,the cheap means of transportation, because our city is near the capital city. What's more, we can start early at 5:30 at the bus stop, where we can catch the earliest bus[高分句型3] (where引导非限制性定语从句). In addition, the Great Wall which is one of the wonders of the world and the summer palace where the ancient emperors lives and worked must be a feast for the eyes. If you like it, not only can we go to Wangfujing Street , but also we can taste so much delicious food[高分句型4] (not only ..bt also..连接并列句子，并使用部分倒装.

I think it must be a wonderful trip. I am looking forward to it.

Much Love,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文。你父母决定于五一小长假带你去旅游，他们让你制定一个旅行计划并以电子邮件的方式告知他们你的计划。内容包括:目的地及预算;交通方式及理由;出发时间地点等。

【详解】词汇积累 非常very→more than 参观visitgo to→pay a visit to

交通工具vehicle→means of transportation 视觉盛宴visual feast→a feast for the eyes

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句：We can choose a bus, the cheap means of transportation, because our city is near the capital city.

拓展句：We can choose a bus ,which is he cheap means of transportation, because our city is near the capital city.

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8.你是高三学生李华，你所属的学校创意社团目前正在开展一项模拟推广活动；向社区年轻人推广以下三个备选项目：

【范文】

Dear society board

As we all know,The school's creative club is curently running a mock promotion for the young in the region. At present,there are three alternatives:a Chinese brand of sports shoes,a community night market and a step count app.

1 am in favor of promoting a steo app.For one thing,It is convenient for us to keep track of how many steps we take each day[高分句型1] (运用了i做形式主语), and it is good for keeping us healthy.For another, It is useful in helping us achieve our sports goals ,which can increase the fun of sports[高分句型2] (which引导的非限制性定语从句).

we should teach young people how to use step-counting apps,so that more young people can use the app.Of course, the most important thing is to encourage young people to walk more and make full use of the step count apps.

Yours

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求考生向社团委员会(society board）写一封信，提交关于推广项目的想法。

【详解】词汇积累 促销：motion→popularization 支持：in favor of→support

追踪：keep track of→record 乐趣：fun→pleasure

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句：It is convenient for us to keep track of how many steps we take each day, and it is good for keeping us healthy.

拓展句：It is convenient for us to keep track of how many steps we take each day, which is good for keeping us healthy.

9. 假设你有意参加某英文报举行的题为“My future home”征文调查活动，征文内容从这些住房特征中选择：交通便利；住房外部环境宜居；家居内部设施齐全；用具及装饰健康环保；住房智能化。

现请你一写篇文章，具体要求如下：(1)你未来理想的住房应该有以上哪三个特征？(2)说明理由。

【范文】

Everyone has their dream home. I hope the ideal housing in the future should have convenient transportation, livable external environment and itelligent housing[高分句型1] (省略that的宾语从句).

In my opinion, convenient transportation should be the first choice for housing. Convenient transportation is good for us to go to work, go shopping and take the children to school. In case of emergency, convenient transportation will allow you to get to your destination smoothly, and you will not miss the opportunity because of trffic. The external environment of housing is livable and more suitable for people to live. I hope my future home will be built in a beautiful place with flowers and trees, which is good for our health [高分句型2] (which引导的非限制性定语从句). In the information age, intelligent housing is beyond reproach. Such a home can make the family feel more secure and save unnecessary wasted time to do more meaningful things.

AIll in all, I want to have an ideal home that belongs to me.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，假设你有意参加某英文报举行的题为"My future home'征文调查活动，征文内容从这些住房特征中选择:交通便利;住房外部环境宜居;家居内部设施齐全;用具及装饰健康环保;住房智能化。你未来理想的住房应该有以上的三个特征并说出理由。

【详解】词汇积累 依我看来: in my opinion→in my view- +personally

对某人好: be good for sb. →be beneficial to sb. →do sb. good

安全的: secure→safe 合适的: be suitable for→be fit for

2.句式拓展 合并简单句

原句: In case of emergency, convenient transportation will allow you to get to your destination smoothly, and you will not miss the opportunity because of taffic.

拓展句: In case of emergency, convenient transporation will alow you to get to your destination smoothly, not missing the opportunity because of trffic.

10. 俗话说:与其诅咒黑暗,不如点亮光明。( It's better to light a candle than to curse the darkness) , 结合你自己或者身边人的一个事例,谈谈你对这句话的理解。

【范文】

As the saying goes,“It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness." In our life, we may get the inspiration that a positive mind shall shed new angles from which the trickiest situation shows a briliant solution.

Last term, I failed an extremely important test, leading to my failure to be adnmitted to a first class university. I felt so depressed and disappointed that I spent nearly half a year in regretting and condemning my carelessness[高分句型1] (that引起的结果状语从句). One day, I read a story about a famous man, who failed to enter a noble university but sueceeded finally with his hard work and determination. I came to understand that maybe success did not come from a decent degree but from your ability to cope with various difficult situations. From that on, I change my atitude and face what I have to face bravely and confidently [高分句型2] (what引起的宾语从句). Now, I am a top student in my college.

Life provides dfferent challenges to us. To overcome them, it is important to face them with a positive mind.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。

【详解】词汇积累 角度: angle→perspective 导致: lead to→result in

崇高的: noble→magnificent 坚定: determination→resolution

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句: Last term, I failed an extremely important test, leading to my failure to be admitted to a first-class university.

拓展句: Last term, I failed an extremely important test, which led to my failure to be admitted to a first-class university.

11. Directions: Write an English composition in 150-200 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

在今年全国两会期间,有代表建议不再将英语或外语设为高考必考科目,但也有教育领域“大咖”反对。对此你有什么看法?

【范文】

During this year's NPC and CPPCC sessions, some deputies suggested that English or foreign languages should no longer be compulsory subjects in the national college entrance exam, but some education majors opposed it[高分句型1] (that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气). As a high school student, I disagree with those deputies and I think English is very important. The reasons are as follows.

English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. There are many English-speaking countries, including England, the United States, Canada and many other countries. It is one of the working languages at intermational meetings and is more often used than the others. It is said that most business ltters are witten in English. Millions of books and magazines are witten in English, too.

English is really a bridge to knowledge. With the help of English, people in developing countries can learn a lot of advanced. experience, modern science and technology faster and better from the developed countries. Only in this way can we serve our country better[高分句型2] (部分倒装句型).

In a word, I don't think English or foreign languages should be excluded from the compulsory subjects in the national college entrance exam.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生对“不再将英语或外语设为高考必考科目”这一观点发表看法。

【详解】词汇积累 会议: session→meeting/conference 代表: deputy→representative

反对: oppose→object 重要的: important→ignificant

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句: As a high school student, I disagree with those deputies and I think English is very important.

拓展句: As a high school student, I disagree with those deputies because I think English is very important.

12. 在大力实施素质教育的今天,学生学业负担过重仍然是一个尚未解决的。 请参考下列要求,对学业负担过重说说你自己的观点。

【范文】

Nowadays teachers tend to give many more assignments than students can do, which put the ltter in trouble. This is a problem to be solved immediately.

A whole day's study at school always exhausts the students. As a matter of fact, what the students need most is rest and relaxation, such as singing and having sports. However, they are forced to do what they are reluctant to do, spending all their spare time doing endless but useless homework, which naturally does great harm not only to their health but to their minds as well. An increasing number of students are getting near-sighted. Personally, what the students are really required to get are both basic skills and creative abilities.

Heavily burdened and trapped by homework, the students are having a hard time. Something must be done about it, and I appeal to the relevant departments of the government to take some measures to end the situation and enable the students to develop in an al-round way.

【分析】这是一篇应用文。 要求考生就学业负担过重说你自己的观点。

【详解】词汇积累 不情愿的: reluctant→unwilling 空闲时间: spare time→fre time

对....害do harm to→be harmful to 采取措施: take measures-→take action

2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句

原句: A whole day's study at school always exhausts the students.

拓展句: A whole day's study at school always exhausts the students,which commonly exists throught the majority of schools.

三、概要写作

Hugging’s Evolutionary Origins

After long stretches of social isolation, many of us are longing for the warmth of a hug. Degges-White, a professor focused on social relationships, says that our need for a hug goes all the way back to the survival of our species. When we’re born, we can’t care for ourselves and we need to be comfortable with being held in order to survive. We’re rewarded with a rush of feel-good hormones that come from a nice embrace.

When we hug, our brains release the oxytocin hormone, making us feel connected. This connection and sense of community has an important evolutionary role because for humans, the security of our small groups and later communities was crucial to survival. Close contact helped build civilization. We may not know what we are getting from greeting our friends and family with a hug; we just enjoy it. It isn’t until those experiences are taken away that we feel pain and sadness. An elbow bump or air greeting are not enough. Research published in the journal Psychological Science has shown that hugging has a “stress cushioning” effect that may even protect us from chronic illness and infections.

When children don’t experience healthy touch, it can impact their development. Kids who didn’t grow up being held, miss out on that sense of safety and protection. They may act out or isolate themselves from those around them. In some cases, the opposite may also be true. Some children may show too much affection, eager for any form of positive attention that they didn’t get at home.

Still, to hug or not to hug? That’s the question right now. According to Degges-White, if you’re both vaccinated, go for it; research has shown that the risk of transmission is extremely low. And if you’re vaccinated but you don’t know for sure whether the person you’re hugging has also been vaccinated, it’s still most likely safe.

【范文】

Hugging has an evolutionary origin. First, new-borns need hugging to survive, for it makes them feel comfortable. Besides, hugging means close contact, which helped to build civilization【高分句型1】(运用非限制性定语从句对原文第二段进行了概括). When people hug, they feel more bonded. Additionally, hugging helps people feel less stressed and its absence can affect kids’ development negatively. Therefore, hugging is recommended for people who are vaccinated【高分句型2】(用who引导定语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级).

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，拥抱有进化的起源。首先，新生儿需要拥抱才能生存，因为这会让他们感到舒适。此外，拥抱意味着亲密接触，这有助于建立文明。当人们拥抱时，他们会感觉更亲密。此外，拥抱有助于减轻人们的压力，它的缺失会对孩子的发展产生负面影响。因此，建议接种疫苗的人拥抱。

【详解】要点摘录

①Degges-White, a professor focused on social relationships, says that our need for a hug goes all the way back to the survival of our species. When we’re born, we can’t care for ourselves and we need to be comfortable with being held in order to survive.

②When we hug, our brains release the oxytocin hormone, making us feel connected. Close contact helped build civilization.

③Research published in the journal Psychological Science has shown that hugging has a “stress cushioning” effect that may even protect us from chronic illness and infections.

④Still, to hug or not to hug? That’s the question right now. According to Degges-White, if you’re both vaccinated, go for it; research has shown that the risk of transmission is extremely low.

缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

遣词造句

Hugging has an evolutionary origin. First, new-borns need hugging to survive, for it makes them feel comfortable.

Besides, hugging means close contact, which helped to build civilization. When people hug, they feel more bonded.

Additionally, hugging helps people feel less stressed and its absence can affect kids’ development negatively.

Therefore, hugging is recommended for people who are vaccinated.

Working Out Worries by Writing

After his father was driven to the hospital for emergent treatment, 43-year-old Yanatha Desouvre began to panic. So, he did one thing that he knew would calm himself: He wrote. Over the next few weeks, Desouvre filled several notebooks, writing about his worry as well as his happy memories with his dad. “Writing allowed me to face my fear and process my pain,” he says. Psychologists refer to that kind of writing as “expressive writing”. People do it by recording their deepest thoughts and feelings. However, different from writing in a journal, expressive writing is to reflect honestly and thoughtfully on a particular frustration or challenge.

A well-known psychology professor says that hundreds of studies have looked at the potential benefits of expressive writing and found it can help reduce pain and improve mood, sleep and memory. It may even help reduce symptoms of various illnesses, and prevent colds and flu.

Expressive writing takes effect because translating a painful experience into language allows people to make meaning out of it, some experts say. The process forces them to organize their thoughts and offers a sense of control, thus completing the pursuit of value from such an experience. Another research suggested that during expressive writing, the act of labeling a feeling can lessen the activity relating to nerves in the threat area of the brain. With these nerves relaxed, people can lower the symptoms of their diseases, enhance their appreciation for life, and increase the acceptance of various experiences in their lives.

What can’t be ignored is that it shouldn’t be used as a replacement for other medical treatments. And people coping with a severe depression may not find it useful to do on their own, without therapy. Yet, it can be a powerful coping tool for many, in large part because it helps battle against their reluctance to face negative emotions.

【范文】

Writing can help people deal with negative feelings. Desouvre once adopted expressive writing, a reflection of an unpleasant experience by recording inner feelings[高分句型一] (运用了同位语结构对第一段进行概括). It benefits patients mentally and physically because it helps them find value of painful experiences or relaxing their nerves【高分句型二】(运用了because引导的状语从句对二、三段内容进行概括). Though not a substitute for medical treatment, expressive writing works for many. (54 words)

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。写作可以帮助人们处理负面情绪。Desouvre曾经采用表达性写作，通过记录内心感受来反映一种不愉快的经历。它对病人的精神和身体都有好处，因为它帮助他们发现痛苦经历的价值或放松他们的神经。虽然不能替代医疗，但富有表现力的写作对许多人来说是有效的。

【详解】要点摘录

①“Writing allowed me to face my fear and process my pain,” he says.

②Psychologists refer to that kind of writing as “expressive writing”.

③A well-known psychology professor says that hundreds of studies have looked at the potential benefits of expressive writing and found it can help reduce pain and improve mood, sleep and memory. It may even help reduce symptoms of various illnesses, and prevent colds and flu.

④Expressive writing takes effect because translating a painful experience into language allows people to make meaning out of it, some experts say.

⑤With these nerves relaxed, people can lower the symptoms of their diseases, enhance their appreciation for life, and increase the acceptance of various experiences in their lives.

⑥What can’t be ignored is that it shouldn’t be used as a replacement for other medical treatments.

⑦Yet, it can be a powerful coping tool for many, in large part because it helps battle against their reluctance to face negative emotions.

2.缜密构思 将第3/4/5三个要点进行重组，将第1/2、6/7要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Writing contributes to coping with negative feelings.

Desouvre once recorded inner feelings by expressive writing, which was a reflection of an unpleasant experience.

Not only does it benefit patients’ mental health but it makes for physical well-being, for it reveals the value of painful experiences or relaxing their nerves.

Though expressive writing can't be replaced for medical treatment, it still functions for many.

Teamwork Doubles the Strength

Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.

As individuals, we possess diverse talents, strengths, weaknesses and experiences. A team is like a blanket that weaves what each of us possesses, resulting in an end product that is diverse yet similar. As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.

Take Leicester City, for example. It won the Premier League in 2016, to the disbelief of many soccer fans. Leicester City, previously regarded as the underdog in the League, displayed surprisingly impressive teamwork that led to its unbelievable victory in soccer history.

Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame. When work is distributed and each of us in a team specializes in specific tasks, we can expect greater job satisfaction.

And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. Team members learn from more experienced members who may offer deeper insights and perspectives. Newer members may also contribute new and brave ideas. Besides encouraging the sharing of knowledge and experiences, teamwork also develops soft skills like communication and interpersonal skills. We learn to respect differences in working styles and opinions, and develop trust when working with others.

Some may think that working in isolation is more efficient since more time is taken when cooperating with others. For more talented individuals, working alone means being the star of a project — there’s no need to share the success or glory with others. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.

【范文】

Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons. Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success[高分句型1]运用动名词作主语对原文第二段进行概括. Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks. Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential[高分句型2]用现在分词作状语对最后两段进行了概括，表达非常高级. (58 words)

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，团队合作对任何团队达成目标都很重要，原因有三。第一，凝聚人才，解决问题，激发创新和成功。其次，团队合作可以提高效率和生产力，因为他们分担了工作量，减轻了压力，完成了特定的任务。最后，团队合作增加了经验丰富的成员和新人的学习机会，鼓励分享和最大化团队的潜力。

【详解】要点摘录

①Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.

②As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.

③Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame.

④And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.

2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons.

Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success.

Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks.

Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential.

Does Zoom exhaust you?

During the COVID-19 pandemic, as social distancing has kept people apart physically, more people are logging on to popular video chat platforms to connect with colleagues, family and friends. And as a result, virtual meetings, or “zooming”, have skyrocketed. However, communication professor Jeremy Bailenson, founding director of the Stanford Virtual Human Interaction Lab (VHIL) examined the psychological consequences of spending hours per day on these platforms, warning that those video calls are likely tiring you out.

In a normal meeting, people will variously be looking at the speaker, taking notes, or looking elsewhere. But on Zoom calls, everyone is looking at everyone, all the time. A listener is treated nonverbally like a speaker, so even if you don’t speak once in a meeting, you are still looking at faces staring at you. The amount of eye contact is dramatically increased. “Social anxiety of public speaking is one of the biggest fears that exist in our population,” Bailenson said. “When you’re standing up there and everybody’s staring at you, that’s a stressful experience.”

Most video platforms show a square of what you look like on camera during a chat, which is unnatural. Bailenson said, “In the real world, if somebody was following you around with a mirror constantly so that you were seeing yourself in a mirror while you were talking to people, making decisions, giving feedback, etc., that would just be crazy.” He cited studies showing that when you see a reflection of yourself, you are more critical of yourself and there will be negative emotional consequences.

Moreover, video chats dramatically reduce our usual mobility. In-person and audio phone conversations allow humans to walk around and move. But with videoconferencing, most cameras have a set field of view, meaning a person has to generally stay in the same spot. Movement is limited in ways that are not natural. “There’s a growing research now that says when people are moving, they’re performing better cognitively,” Bailenson said.

【范文】

According to Jeremy Bailenson, although virtual meetings are popular, they can be exhausting[高分句型1] 运用让步状语从句对原文第一段进行了概括. Firstly, excessive amounts of eye contact may cause people feel stressed. Secondly, seeing yourself reflected during video chats constantly contributes to negative emotions. Thirdly, video chats greatly prevent us from moving in a natural way, which reduces cognitive performance[高分句型2] 用which引导非限制性定语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，Jeremy Bailenson表示，虽然虚拟会议很受欢迎，但它可能会让人筋疲力尽。首先，过多的眼神交流可能会让人感到压力。其次，在视频聊天中不断看到自己会导致负面情绪。第三，视频聊天极大地阻碍了我们以自然的方式移动，降低了认知能力。

【详解】 要点摘录

①However, communication professor Jeremy Bailenson, founding director of the Stanford Virtual Human Interaction Lab (VHIL) examined the psychological consequences of spending hours per day on these platforms, warning that those video calls are likely tiring you out.

②“Social anxiety of public speaking is one of the biggest fears that exist in our population,” Bailenson said. “When you’re standing up there and everybody’s staring at you, that’s a stressful experience.”

③He cited studies showing that when you see a reflection of yourself, you are more critical of yourself and there will be negative emotional consequences.

④Moreover, video chats dramatically reduce our usual mobility. In-person and audio phone conversations allow humans to walk around and move. But with videoconferencing, most cameras have a set field of view, meaning a person has to generally stay in the same spot.

2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

According to Jeremy Bailenson, although virtual meetings are popular, they can be exhausting.

Firstly, excessive amounts of eye contact may cause people feel stressed.

Secondly, seeing yourself reflected during video chats constantly contributes to negative emotions.

Thirdly, video chats greatly prevent us from moving in a natural way, which reduces cognitive performance.

概要写作

These days a green building means more than just the color of the paint. Green building can also refer to environmentally friendly houses, factories, and offices.

Green building means “reducing the impact of the building on the land”, Taryn Holowka of the U. S. Green Building Council in Washington, D．C．said. According to Holowka, building account for 65 percent of total U. S. electricity use.

But green building can reduce energy and water use. Also, the buildings are often located near public transportation such as buses and subways, so that people can drive their cars less. That could be good for the environment, because cars use lots of gas and give off pollution. Green buildings are often built on developed land, so that the buildings don’t destroy forests.

Marty Dettling is the project manger for a building that put these ideas into action. The Solaire has been called the country’s first green high-rise building. According to Dettling, “We’ve reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by 50 percent.”

The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power. “On the face of the building we have solar panels which change the sun’s energy into electricity,” Dettling explained. The Solaire also has lights that automatically turn off when people leave the room. In addition, the building has lots of windows, allowing people to use the sun for light during the day. The Solaire cuts water by reusing it.

Not everyone is eager to move into a green building, however. Some people think that things like solar panels cost more money than more traditional energy sources. Anyhow, Holowka said, “It’s going to be big.”

【范文】

①Environmentally friendly structures are called green buildings. ②They can reduce energy and water use by a considerable percentage, thus lessen pollution and avoid destroying forests as well. [高分句型1]运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第二段和第三段进行了概括。其中运用了动名词作宾语 ③For example, the green building Solaire has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water. ④Although not all people like green building yet, it is expected to be popular in the near future. 用although引导让步状语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，环境友好型结构被称为绿色建筑。 它们可以大幅度地减少能源和水的使用，从而减少污染并避免破坏森林。 例如，绿色建筑Solaire通过使用太阳能和回用水，在一定程度上大大减少了能源和水的使用。虽然不是所有人都喜欢绿色建筑，但预计在不久的将来它会流行起来。

【详解】要点摘录

①Green building can also refer to environmentally friendly houses, factories, and offices.

②But green building can reduce energy and water use. That could be good for the environment, because cars use lots of gas and give off pollution. Green buildings are often built on developed land, so that the buildings don’t destroy forests.

③According to Dettling, “We’ve reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by 50 percent.”. The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power. The Solaire cuts water by reusing it.

④Not everyone is eager to move into a green building, however. Some people think that things like solar panels cost more money than more traditional energy sources. Anyhow, Holowka said, “It’s going to be big.”

2. 缜密构思 将第1、2两个要点进行整合，将第3、4两个要点进行重组。

3.遣词造句

Environmentally friendly structures are called green buildings, which can reduce energy and water use by a considerable percentage, thus lessen pollution and avoid destroying forests as well. For example, the green building Solaire has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water. Although not all people like green building yet, it is expected to be popular in the near future.

Life On Venus?

Cats Make for Ideal Human Companions

Cats have a reputation for being colder and less cuddly (令人想拥抱的) than their counterparts—dogs. In reality, they form close bonds with their owners and provide a sense of companionship, particularly for women. In fact, the findings of one Austrian study show that owning a cat is the emotional equivalent of being in a romantic relationship.

Some people feel silly talking to their pets, since, of course, they can’t respond. But interacting with your feline (猫科的) companions has proven health benefits. Not only does talking to your cat improve your bond, but it’s also said to be beneficial to your mental health by helping to improve your mood, lower your stress levels, and reduce our feelings of loneliness.

Cats are experts at sleeping, so it’s perhaps no surprise that they can help improve your sleep, too. A Mayo Clinic study found that people who slept with their pets in the same room were almost twice as likely to get a good night’s rest, with only 20 percent saying that they found their pets’ presence destructive.

Cats may not be able to help with the housekeeping, but they can assist in keeping your house free of mice. It turns out there’s some truth behind the cartoon cat-and-mouse chase. When mice smell certain proteins in cat saliva (唾液), they become tearful and therefore avoid the area.

It’s important for children to learn to care for and look after a living thing, just as their parents take care of them. Cats can help children develop social skills as they learn to approach the feline carefully and gently. Looking after a cat also encourages a sense of responsibility.

In addition to filling your heart with love, cats can contribute to keeping your heart healthy. Numerous studies have shown that owning a cat can help reduce your blood pressure and heart rate, as well as lowering your triglyceride (甘油三酸酯) and cholesterol levels, thereby reducing your risk of having a heart attack or stroke.

【范文】

One possible version:

Cats can form close relationships with humans, particularly with women. Interacting with cats can help letter your mood, reduce stress, avoid loneliness and improve your sleep. [高分句型1]运用一个动名词作主语对原文第二段和第三段进行了概括 Cats can also help keep your house free of mice and help children develop a sense of responsibility. Lots of studies have shown that owning a cat can also keep your heart healthy. [高分句型2]用that引导宾语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级

【分析】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍的是养猫的各种好处。

【详解】要点摘录

①In reality, they form close bonds with their owners and provide a sense of companionship, particularly for women.

②But interacting with your feline(猫科的) companions has proven health benefits. Not only does talking to your cat improve your bond, but it’s also said to be beneficial to your mental health by helping to improve your mood, lower your stress levels, and reduce our feelings of loneliness.

③Cats are experts at sleeping, so it’s perhaps no surprise that they can help improve your sleep, too.

④Cats may not be able to help with the housekeeping, but they can assist in keeping your house free of mice.

⑤Looking after a cat also encourages a sense of responsibility.

⑥Numerous studies have shown that owning a cat can help reduce your blood pressure and heart rate, as well as lowering your triglyceride (甘油三酸酯) and cholesterol levels, thereby reducing your risk of having a heart attack or stroke.

2.缜密构思 将第2、3、4、5四个要点进行整合，将第1、6两个要点进行重组。

3.遣词造句

Cats can form close relationships with humans, particularly with women. Having cats as pets has many benefits, which include helping letter your mood, reducing stress, avoiding loneliness, improving your sleep, keeping your house free of mice and helping children develop a sense of responsibility. Lots of studies have shown that owning a cat can also keep your heart healthy.

Are People Unique?

It is human beings' pride that we are the only species on the Planet that can speak and think. However, recent research casts doubt on that common belief.

Zuberbuhler, a psychologist at St Andrews University, and his colleagues recorded thousands of calls made by Diana monkeys and noticed that the monkeys adapted their calls to change the meaning to warn one another about different situations. For example,they made a "krack" alarm call at the sight of a tiger. However,when they merely repeated calls made by other monkeys they added an "oo".

The researchers found that the same calls would be recognized by other species, like Campbell's monkeys. So they are communicating across species."And since then we have found that hornbill birds can understand these calls and they too can understand all the different meanings, said Zuberbuhler. What is also surprising is that signs of intelligence have been found in birds whose small brains were long assumed to be a complete barrier to intelligence. However, all that is changing fast. A few years ago, Irene Pepperberg of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology taught a parrot to recognize and count up to six objects, which couldn't have been achieved if birds were unable to memorize.

Last year that was topped by Alex Kacelnik, a professor of behavioral ecology at Oxford, who discovered that crows (乌鸦) are capable of using tools in complex orders, the first time such behavior had been observed in non-humans. In an experiment seven crows successfully grabbed a piece of food placed out of reach using three different lengths of stick. Crucially, they were able to complete the task without any special training, suggesting the birds were capable of a level of abstract reasoning normally associated only with humans.

All this is powerful evidence against the idea that people are unique.

【范文】

One possible version:

It was commonly thought that people are unique because we are the only species that can speak or think. [高分句型1]运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段进行了概括。其中that引导的定语从句、because引导的表原因的分句，that引导的定语从句等表达高级However, recent studies find that the monkeys can adapt their calls to warn others of different circumstances, which can be recognized by other species. [高分句型2]用that引导宾语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句对第二段和第三段进行了概括，表达非常高级This means they are communicating. Besides, birds can also demonstrate abilities to memorize and reason abstractly.

Translation

【分析】本文是一篇说明文，主要讲的是通过对猴子，老虎及鸟类的研究，研究人员提出了对“我们是地球上唯一会说话和思考的物种”的观点的质疑。

【详解】要点摘录

①It is human beings' pride that we are the only species on the Planet that can speak and think.

②Zuberbuhler, a psychologist at St Andrews University, and his colleagues recorded thousands of calls made by Diana monkeys and noticed that the monkeys adapted their calls to change the meaning to warn one another about different situations.

③The researchers found that the same calls would be recognized by other species, like Campbell's monkeys. So they are communicating across species.

④Crucially, they were able to complete the task without any special training, suggesting the birds were capable of a level of abstract reasoning normally associated only with humans.

2.缜密构思 将第1、4两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

It was commonly thought that people are unique because we are the only species that can speak or think. However, recent studies find that the monkeys can adapt their calls to warn others of different circumstances, which can be recognized by other species. This means they are communicating. Besides, birds can also demonstrate abilities to memorize and reason abstractly.

Robotic Exoskeletons

Thanks to robotic exoskeletons, victims of spinal cord (脊髓) injury have a new reason to hope. Robotic exoskeletons, consisting of metal legs, motors, batteries, wiring, a controller and a set of strips work together like the user's bones, muscles and nerves-outside the body. Fastened into an exoskeleton and supported by sticks, users can direct the machinery to take them where they want to go.

In addition to partly restoring mobility, robotic exoskeletons offer the significant mental and physical health benefits of standing up and moving. Just being able to get up from a wheelchair gives patients a more natural, positive view of the world. It also helps relieve pressure on patients' skin and reduces the danger of pressure sores. Standing upright strengthens a disabled person's muscles and bones, improves heart health，and reduces certain other health complications (并发症). And it may actually result in partial nerve repair, something that can only happen when a patient is able to move.

As promising as this technology is, however, it is no simple cure-all for paralysis(瘫痪) or its complications. The motion is not accurate compared with natural walking, and exoskeletons are not easy to use, especially on surfaces that are not smooth. They are very expensive, costing about US$100000. Health insurance plans and government programs may not cover the cost of buying one.

Nevertheless, robotic exoskeletons, and access to them, will continue to improve. As with much modem technology, robotic exoskeletons will likely become more capable and easy to use, even as their cost goes down. Governments and insurers may increasingly see that the health benefits of these walking machines outweigh the costs, making it easier to fund them. Perhaps the day will come when nearly everyone paralyzed by spinal cord injury will be able to "walk" again.

【范文】

Robotic exoskeletons, a kind of machinery that works outside the body, give paralyzed patients new hope to stand or walk again[高分句型1] 复合句中有Robotic exoskeletons的同位 语a kind of machinery和一个定语从句that work outside the body,对第一个和第二个要点进行了重组，精准到位. They benefit patients a lot both physically and mentally. But currently, they're hard to use for lack of accurate motion and difficult to access for high costs[高分句型2] 使用了主动表示被动的句型：they're hard to use和(they're) difficult to acess,还使用了表示原因的短语(for lack of accurate motion和for high costs)作状语,这种表达对第二、三要点的归纳很到位. But the situation is improving with modern technology.

【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章说明了机器人外部骨骼是一种在体外运作的机械，给瘫痪的患者带来了重新站起来或走路的希望，它使患者在身心两方面都能受益很多。但是目前由于缺乏精确的操控而难以使用，并且本钱高昂。不过随着科学技术的开展，这种情况正在不断得到改善。

【详解】要点摘录

①Thanks to robotic exoskeletons, victims of spinal cord (脊髓) injury have a new reason to hope.

②Robotic exoskeletons, consisting of metal legs, motors, batteries, wiring, a controller and a set of strips work together like the user's

bones, muscles and nerves-outside the body.

③In addition to partly restoring mobility, robotic exoskeletons offer the significant mental and physical health benefits of standing up and

moving.

④The motion is not accurate compared with natural walking, and exoskeletons are not easy to use, especially on surfaces that are not

smooth. They are very expensive, costing about US$ 00000.

⑤Nevertheless, robotic exoskeletons, and access to them, will continue to improve. As with much modern technology, robotic exoskeletons will likely become more capable and easy to use, even as their cost goes down.

2.缜密构思 将第一个和第二二个要点进行重组，将第三个要点进行总结改写,将第四和第五个要点进行整合。

You still need a better reason to plant a tree?

Police aren’t cheap and neither are lawyers, judges, and all the other layers that make up the justice system. But trees and some grass, in comparison, are a real bargain, and they prove to be effective in fighting crimes.

Many cities used to launch programs to plant vegetation along roadways to help absorb rainwater. After tracking 14 types of crime in nearby areas, Michelle Kondo, a social scientist found that a variety of crimes including property crimes such as theft and burglary, and violent crimes such as armed fights and mayhem in those areas decreased to 27 percent, a stunning 18 percent fall. Kondo believed the appearance of city trucks and vans in the landscaped areas---- for planting and maintenance---was enough to scare away potential criminals.

Kondo’s study also worked on the link between grassland care and decrease of the crime in downtown areas. It’s tempting to use income as the connection. After all, if you have the crime and money to water your lawn, you probably live in a neighborhood that sees less crime. But actually, people are less likely to hang in those areas where the streets are maintained or cleaned. “You will see less kids hanging on the corners,” Kondo said. He argued that caution of the local people implied by the organized greenery helped to frighten away ill-intentioned guys, by announcing to would-be criminals that there are “eyes on the street” that care for their neighborhood and would be more likely to report a crime.

We already know greenery is beautiful to look at and can help improve mood and health while reducing pollution. Now we can add crime-fighting to the list of vegetation’s many benefits. Therefore, are you ready to plant a tree?

【范文】

Vegetation's has many benefits. It can't only make our community beautiful, but also can help improve mood and health while reducing pollution[高分句型1] (not only..but also.. .连接两个并列结构对最后-段部分内容进行总结,表达高级). More importantly, trees and some grass play an active role in lighting crimes because the organized greenery helped to scare away bad guys with bad intentions. [高分句型2] (because引导的原因状语从句对二三段部分内容进行总结,表达高级)

【分析】要点摘录

①Trees and some grass prove to be effective in lighting crimes.

②The appearance of city trucks and vans for planting and maintenance in the landscaped areas was enough to scare away potential criminals.

③The organized greenery helped to frighten away il-intentioned guys.

④We already know greenery is beautiful to look at ,can help improve mood and health while reducing pollution, and can also help to fight crimes

2.缜密构思：将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、3两个要 点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Trees and some grass play an active role in lighting crimes.

The organized greenery helped to frighten away il-intentioned guys

Greenery is beautiful to loo at, can help improve mood and health while reducing pollution, and can also help to fight crimes

概要写作

Surveys indicate that a third of Britons regularly eat on their own. OpenTable, an online restaurant booking app, found that solo dining in New York increased by 80% during the past 5 years. And in Japan, the world capital of solo dining, a trend for "low interaction dining" has taken off. Restaurants are opening which facilitate the ultimate solo dining experience: passing bowls of noodles through black curtains into individual booths.

Is this a worrying trend? We think so. Research is revealing the negative impacts of eating alone, which has been found to be linked to a variety of mental and physical health conditions, from depression and diabetes to high blood pressure.

So it's cheering that hundreds of food sharing initiatives have sprung up around the world. There's London's Casserole Club, for example, whose volunteers share portions of home-cooked food with people in their area who aren't always able to cook for themselves, in which case they put an end to food waste. Or there is South Africa's Food Jams, social gatherings in which participants are paired up, preferably with strangers, and given a portion of the meal to prepare. Many participantsinterviewed mentioned that their loneliness was greatly relieved. Such initiatives offer lessons of all kinds to those thinking about how our food systems need to change. They also somewhat compensate for the undesirable outcomes sole eating brings.

So why do people stop eating together? There are a variety of reasons. Authors such as Michael Pollan argue that it is due to the fact that people attach less value to home-based labor, including cooking. The widening of the workforce, which brought many women out of the kitchen and into the workplace during the 20th century, also contributed. Meanwhile, the growth in insecure and inconsistent working patterns among a growing proportion of the population also discourages meals eaten communally.

【范文】

The trend of sole dining is catching on in major countries. However, it does harm physically and mentally. [高分句型1] (however对前文内容表达转折, physically和mentally副词作状语修饰动作does harm) Fortunately food-sharing programs make up for its bad effects by avoiding food waste and combating loneliness[高分句型2] (运用介词by+ doing作方式状语,表达比较高级). Eating together has declined because of people's undervaluing of cooking at home, more women's entry into the workforce and weakening work relationships[高分句型3] (动名词eating作主语, because of后接名词短语和动名词作并列宾语,充分使用了非谓语动词里的高级表达).

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。单人用餐的趋势正在主要国家流行起来。然而,它确实会伤害身体和精神。幸运的是,食物共享计划通过避免食物浪费和对抗孤独来弥补它的不良影响。于人们低估了在家做饭的价值,更多的女性进入职场,以吸工作关系的弱化,在-起吃饭的人数有所下降。

【详解】要点摘录

①.Surveys indicate that a third of Britons regularly eat on their own. OpenTable, an online restaurant booking app, found that solo dining in New York increased by 80% during the past 5 years.

②.Research is revealing the negative impacts of eating alone, which has been found to be linked to a variety of mental and physical health conditions, from depression and diabetes to high blood pressure.

③.There's London's Casserole Club, for example, whose volunteers share portions of home-cooked food with people in their area who aren't always able to cook for themselves, in which case they put an end to food waste.

④.The widening of the workforce, which brought many women out of the kitchen and into the workplace during the 20th century, also contributed.

2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第3、4两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

The trend of sole dining is catching on in major countries.

However, it does harm physically and mentally. Fortunately food-sharing programs make up for its bad effects by avoiding food waste and combating loneliness.

Because of people's undervaluing of cooking at home, more women's entry into the workforce and weakening work relationships, they often choose to eat alone.